考研英语作文

小作文

  • 书信
  • 通知
  • 告示
  • 纪要

书信

  • 建议信
  • 邀请信
  • 投诉信
  • 感谢信
  • 道歉信

==格式要清楚==:左上角Dear 最左(靠左最下两行+结语+署名

==书信的一般结构==

  • 介绍 自我介绍+写信目的
  • 主题
  • 结语
  • 用词是否合适!

自我介绍 + 写信目的

==自我介绍:==(熟人可以不写这部分)

I am a staff member of the company.

I am a freshman/sophomore/ junior/ senior/ undergraduate/ graduate majoring law at Shanghai University.

I am a resident who lives in this community.

==来信目的:==

I am writing 【the letter】【 ==[with + 某种情感]== with great sorry 】to do sth/ for purpose of doing sth 【==表达某种目的== 】

表达目的的例子:

道歉: expressing my sincere apology to you; 建议 offering several conductive suggestions/proposals/recommendations to you;

投诉信模板

Dear Sir or Madam

==自我介绍:————(例如:I am a customer in your store)————== It is with regret that I resort to writing this formal complaint regarding the poor service your product provided. I am great disappointed to the stuff. Dissatisfaction is the least I could express after the problems put me through. Primarily , ==抱怨1————==. Additionally ==抱怨2——==. Furthermore, ==抱怨3———==.

I insist on a prompt and appropriate response at your earliest convenience. I hope you can solve the urgency for me as soon as possible. Your special attention to this correspondence is greatly appreciated! I am anticipating positive news from you.

Sincerely Yours

Li Ming

建议信

因为可能存在对政府部分,学校部门等的正式的建议,所以在这里准备两份建议信模板【nnd Chat GPT tql!!!】

  • 正式建议(语域比较正式)

==自我介绍:————(I am a senior majoring in Law at London University)==. I am writing to bring to your attention a matter of concern and offer some suggestions for improvement. In light of recent events, I would like to propose a solution to the ongoing challenge of ==具体问题==. To begin with, ==Doing sth (具体解决方法)== stands as a effective strategy to address ==具体问题==. [说明建议优势] Implementing the suggested changes would not only address the immediate concerns but also contribute to long-term benefits. Additionally,==doing sth(具体解决方法)== is also practical. Considering the collective responsibility we share for ==具体问题==, I believe the implementation of these suggestions would benefit our ==community/city (具体范围)== as a whole.

I appreciate your time and attention to this matter and hope that my suggestions can be considered as part of the ongoing efforts to the improvement. Thank you for your commitment, and I look forward to positive developments.

中间段表达学习:

… 是非常重要的 例如:To be ==independent/ optimistic/ positive (怎样)== is of utmost importance.

… 做…是…的开端 例如: ==Doing sth== is the first thing to do at the beginning of ==例如:college life==

…是解决【问题】的一个有效的措施: ==具体措施(名词)== stands out as an effective strategy to address ==问题==

  • 非正式建议:(语域比较轻松)

I hope this letter/(如果是邮件用)message finds you well.==随机发挥(根据要求表达感情)==

Regarding to your inquiry about ==提议方向==, I believe the following suggestion aligns well with your aspirations. To start, ==要点1==. Next,==要点2(中间可以适当添加连接说明句子)==. Additionally, ==要点3==.

Once again , ==(如果有的话可以表示再次感谢)== thank your for your kind words . I am confident you’ll excel in your endeavors. Feel free to reach out if you have any more questions.

【==引入建议原因==Considering the recent challenges you have been facing, I thought it might be beneficial to suggest possible solutions / ==或者== I believe the following suggestions aligns well with your aspirations 】.【==具体建议== Have you considered trying a new approach to ==根据话题==? I believe ==doing sth== might yield positive results.】【==提供支持性理由== The reason behind this suggestion is based on my own experience when I encountered a similar situation.】Additionally,【==引出别的建议==Just as you’ve been there for me in the past, I want to offer support by sharing this recommendation that ==…具体建议…==】

【==最后:鼓励讨论和反馈== Let’s catch up soon and discuss this further. Your perspective on this letter is valuable to me.】【==表达进一步交流意愿==I’m always here for you, and I believe that together we can navigate through this and find the best way forward】

邀请信模板

  • 邀请单个名人

Dear Sir or Madam

==活动== will be held in the ==地点:auditorium== from ==时间:8 am to 11 am==. With your ==夸她的话:remarkable/prominent/excellent/extraordinary expert knowledge==, you have contribute a lot to the development of our University. So I, on behalf of ==组织:Students Union==, sincerely extend an invitation to ==活动:this Ceremony==.We will be honored if you could be on the scene. ==活动:the event== aims to … . ====

The schedule of the activity is attached for your reference. Please confirm your availability on or before October 20th by replying this email. Your consideration of this invitation will be highly appreciated!

Best regards

Li Ming

  • 邀请普通人

通知

告示

纪要

  • 会议详情
  • 会议目的
  • 会议议程

I Meeting Details

Location: ==Conference room at Headquarter==

Date: ==October 20, 2023==

Time: ==15:00 - 18:00==

Attendees: A,B, and C

II Meeting Objective

==会议目的==

III Meeting Agenda

  1. A 做了什么
  2. B 做了社么
  3. C做了什么

Minutes submitted by:

Approved by:

表达的学习

  • 表达赞扬

    • 对某人取得某种成就表示 赞扬:

      I am delighted to extend my warmest congratulations on you for your outstanding achievements ——- ==(对方的成就 例如:)admission to Peking University==! Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off and I couldn’t be happier for you.

  • 表示感谢

    • 对某人对你的祝贺表示感谢

      I am delighted to extend my sincere gratitude for your heartfelt congratulations on ==sth==. Your support means a lot to me.

  • 表达建议

    • 根据你关于…的要求,我的主要建议是

      Regarding your inquiry about ==某方面==, my key recommendation is to ==主要建议== ==下一句补充==. Additionally, ==(额外补充)==

大作文思路

段落 part I part II part III
第一段 开头(主题词) 描述图表 总结图表(可有可无,最好加上)
第二段 引入主题【承上启下】 原因+举例 总结(可无)
第三段 归纳总结 预测趋势 建议措施 憧憬未来

对于动态图和静态图有不同的图表描述

大作文图表题

  • 图表描述(简洁,全面)

思路:开头短句+描述图表+点出趋势

The ==line graph\ pie chart \ column chart \ table== invites our attention to a holistic view of ==图表主题==. As can be seen, (==图表描述==)==[== 例如:==A部分:==constitutes [a massive/ mere] (==具体占比== ) ==]== followed by ==[== 例如:==B部分:(直接描写具体内容)+== (==具体占比== ) and ==C部分:(也是这季节描写内容)+(占比)== ==]== Overall, [==表述趋势:== there is an upward trend in (==图表中展示的某个部分==) ]

PS:

如果描述的两个部分的对比明显(例如:一个特别高,一个特别低)可以使用 In contrast 替代 followed by 做连接词,如果差别不大可以使用 Still做连接词

  • 原因分析

思路:承上启下过渡句+

【==承上==】Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective, chief among them are as follow:

描述原因:

==经济因素==

Due to the boost in economic growth, which has ==(提高消费能力带来社会繁荣) enhanced consumer power and fostered societal prosperity== , ==doing sth== has become less a problem.

==社会因素==

==文化因素==

==政府措施==

The government’s effort in ==doing something== is an impetus for ==结果overall societal prosperity==

==科技因素==

The widespread of internet access leads to the proliferation of ==something==, making ==doing something== a convenient for us.

  • 结尾

思维拓展:实际上 ==某种现象== 不仅仅是==……==的结果,也是对==……==的回应(response)。这些==A== 和 ==B==相互作用表明 ==……== 的趋势有望在可预见的未来持续存在,并可能进一步加强。

In summary, ==…== is not merely a consequence of ==…== but also a response to ==…== . This multifaceted interplay of ==因素 例如:economy and health consideration== suggests that the trend of individuals opting for ==人们选择做什么== is poised to persist and possibly intensify in the foreseeable future.

==学习==

  • something is expected to becoming increasingly prevalent. 将会变得越来越流行(普遍)
  • with the continuous development of the economy and society, an escalating number of people will do something. 越来越多的人会做…

2015年大作文

The pie chart allows us a holistic view of the spending pattern of the residents in a specific city. The part of buying gifts of new year constitutes a massive(40%) followed by transportation (20%) and have a meal together(20 %). Still others account for 20%.

Reasons abound, but from my perspective there are several ingradients for the phenomenon: Firstly, it is tradition of sending new year gifts to relatives and friends. Secondly, the large scale of workers who leave their hometown for work exert a profound influence of the expenditure in transportation.

2011年

小作文(建议信)

Dear Li Ming

I hope this letter finds you well. I am delighted to extend the warmest congratulation on you for your outstanding achievement —— admission to Nanjin University. Your hard work have truly paid off, and I couldn’t be happier for you.

Regarding your inquiry about preparing for university, I believe the following suggestions align well with your aspirations. To begin with, realizing what you want is a key to getting prepared for your university life, in that the more clear target you have the more efficient you will be. Additionally, immerse yourself in what you love, and joyfully embrace the learning process.

Once again congratulations! I am confident you will excel in your endeavors. Feel free to reach out if you have any questions.

Best regards

SHL

2018

小作文

Dear Professor Smith

I hope this email finds you well. I regret to inform you that due to unforeseen situation, I must cancel my visit and, unfortunately, won’t be able to meet you as initially planned. I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.

I value the opportunity to meet with you and discuss the economic meeting. In light of this circumstance, I would like to suggest rescheduling our meeting. I am flexible with dates and would appreciate your guidance on a suitable time in the near future.

Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience, and I appreciate your understanding. I look forward to the possibility of meeting at a later date.

大作文

The pie chart invites our attention a holistic view of the factors consumers pay attention to when selecting restaurants in a specific city. As can be seen, the special points of a restaurant make a massive part (36.30%), and service take account of 26.80%. Moreover, the environment is also account for about 23.80% share. Additionally, the price (8.40%) and other points(4.70%) take the rest share.

Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective chief among them are as follows: To begin with, the price of a restaurant has been less a problem for the customers, due to the economic growth, which enhanced the power of consumption and fostered the societal prosperity. Additionally, the reasons for distinctive features becoming a key factor in consumers’ choice of restaurants stem from two main aspects. Firstly the continuous improving living standards plays a pivotal role. Secondly, the profound cultural heritage in our country also significantly contributes.

As final observation, we can probably expect to see the persistent growth of this situation. It is a trend that is likely to carry a promising results for many years to come.

造成特色成为消费者选择餐厅的原因主要有两方面,一方面是不断提升的生活水平,另一方面是我国深厚的传统文化底蕴。

2020年

小作文(建议信+介绍信)

Dear Students

Welcome to the tour of the historical site —— the Forbidden City. I am delighted to writing this message to offer you some information about the site and some tips.

The Forbidden City is well known by it history value, as it used to be the home of the emperors of ancient China. In this site, you will be amazed by it’s magnificent architecture and many things it possesses. Additionally, you will get a glance to acknowledge how the emperor used to live and work. Moreover, please follow the tips aligns. Firstly do not touch any relic, it is our duty to protect those relics. Secondly, do not throw rubbish, if you have rubbish to throw please find a rubbish bin.

Hope you have a wonderful trip. 【==improvement==: Thank you for your attention, and I wish you an enriching and delightful visit to the Forbidden City. 】Feel free to reach out me if you have any question.

Best regards

SHL

大作文

The pie chart invites our attention a holistic view of the reading purpose of the college students in a specific university. As can be seen, learning has been a main reason which account for about 59.5% and killing time is another target (21.3%). Moreover getting information and other purposes take about 17.0% and 2.2% respectively.

Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective chief among them are as follow. Firstly, ==the use of smartphones has been a common sense among college students==, due to the boost in economy, which enhanced consumer power and fostered societal prosperity. ==Another crucial factor is== the intense competition in today’s market, compelling students to improve their skills. ==Consequently==, the high-pressure situation explains why there exist 21.3% students choose to have a leisure by reading via smartphone.

In summary, with the development of the economy and social aspect, an increasing number of students will devote more energy to their studies. The use of smart-phones by them to read and acquire knowledge is expected to become more prevalent.

综上,随着经济社会的不断发展,==某种现象==. ==现象走势(用手机学习的学生会越来越多)==

The pie chart provides a comprehensive overview of the reading purposes of college students in a specific university. As observed, ==learning is the primary motive==, accounting for approximately 59.5%, ==while leisure and time-killing constitute another significant category at 21.3%.== Additionally, obtaining information and other purposes represent about 17.0% and 2.2%, respectively.

Numerous factors contribute to this phenomenon, with the foremost being, in my opinion, ==the widespread availability of smartphones== among college students. ==This can be attributed to== the economic boost, which has increased consumer power and societal prosperity. ==Another crucial factor is the intense competition in today’s environment==, compelling students to enhance their skills. Consequently, the high-pressure situation explains why 21.3% of students resort to using smartphones for leisure and time-killing activities.

In conclusion, with the continuous development of the economy and society, an escalating number of students will invest more effort in their studies. ==The utilization of smartphones for reading and knowledge acquisition is expected to become increasingly prevalent.==

  • 多用 名词+be did .. 这种形式

2021年

小作文

Dear Jack

I hope this message finds you well. I am delighted to extend an invitation to an on-line meeting, which will be held from 7 pm to 9 pm on October 28th.

The subject of this meeting will be concentrated on “Learning with Efficiency” which means everyone need to share some experience or methods on how to be more efficient. What’s more, this meeting also offer you an opportunity to find a better way to improve your learning. Moreover, please use the App —— “TS Meeting” and use the code “xxx-xxx” to attend the meeting.

Thank you for your attention to the message. Please confirm your availability on or before October 27th, your consideration of this invitation will be highly appreciated!

Best regards

Li Ming

大作文

This column chart invites our attention to a holistic view of the exercise ways of residents in a particular city. As can be seen, working out alone is the most prevalent way, accounting for 54.3%, while exercising with friends constitute another 47.7%. Moreover, exercising with family and with a lot of people represent 23.9% and 15.8% respectively.

Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective chief among them are as follow. Firstly, exercising has been less a problem for residents, due to the boost in economy, which enhanced their living standards and fostered societal prosperity. Consequently, an increasing number of people choose to exercise by themselves to improve their body for different purposes. Moreover, the epidemic is also a reason to explain why people tend to work out alone or with their friends. Because they have to protect their health from the infection.

Furthermore, the ongoing epidemic also plays a role in explaining why people prefer to work out alone or with friends, as they prioritize protecting their health from potential infections.

In summary, the prevalence of solo exercising is not merely the consequence of economic development but also a response to the epidemic. This multifaceted interplay of economy and health consideration suggests that individuals opting for exercising by themselves is poised to persist and possibly intensify in the foreseeable future.

2022年

大作文

The column chart invites our attention to a holistic view of the change of our delivery industry from 2018 to 2020. As can be seen, the service demand of delivery are in getting momentum totally and especially in countrysides. The number of 2018 and 2019 is 12 and 15 (billions) respectively while increased to 30 in 2020, which is two times of the number in 2019. Additionally, the number of 2018 2019 and 2020 in total is 51 64 and 83 (billions) respectively.

Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective chief among them are as follow. To begin with, the delivery has been less a problem to our people, due to the boost in economy, which enhanced the power of consumption and fostered the societal prosperity. Consequently, an increasing number of people can ==enjoy== the convenience ==offered== by the delivery industry. Moreover, the government commitment to rural development has met the escalating demand of the service in these areas. Additionally, the epidemic also plays a role in explaining the surge of the need, as people want to protect their health from possible infections.

In summary, the increasing need of delivery service is not merely the consequence of the economic development but also a response to the health consideration brought by the epidemic. This multifaceted interplays of economy and health consideration suggests that the expand of delivery service is poised to persist and possibly intensify in the foreseeable future.

2023年

小作文

Dear David

I hope this message finds you well. Regarding your inquiry about the option of which show to attend. I prefer to recommend the robot show. I believe the following reasons aligns well with your aspirations. To begin with, as you told me you love the character of Iron Man in Marvel Comic, the robot show will be a best chance to get a glance of many robots and some robots like Iron Man. Moreover, have you heard the company called Boston Dynamic, it comes! It is a good opportunity to go to the robot show and see it’s brand new product.

I wish you have an enriching visit to the show. I am looking forward to hearing form you soon!

Best regards

SHL

2013年

小作文

Dear Students

I hope this message finds you well. Our class have an opportunity to make an impact on the lives of those kids in need. We are going to hold a charity sale from 9 am to 12 am at the auditorium.

We encourage each of you to participate by donating clothes and books, or purchasing things from the sale. Your generosity will bring smiles to the face of those children! Let’s come together to make a difference! If you have any question about the sale, please feel free to reach out to me.

Thank you for your support!

大作文

The column chart invites our attention to a holistic view of students’ situation of taking part-time jobs in a particular university. As can be seen, the rate of taking part-time jobs in seniors reaches 88.24%, while for sophomores and juniors, the rates are 71.3% and 71.93% respectively. Additionally, this rate of freshmen is 67.77%.

Reasons abound for the phenomenon, but from my perspective chief among them are as follow. To begin with, part-time job has been prevalent among students, due to their increasing ==expenses== and improving live standard in university. Moreover, getting a part-time job plays an important role in helping them to deal with their tuition. What’s more, the high pressure of entering into the society that those seniors will face, explains why most seniors prefer to seek a part-time job as a preparation for their future.

In summary, this situation is not merely a consequence of their escalating living ==expenses== and their poor economic situation, but also a response to the unsure future they will confront. This multifaceted interplay of those factors suggests that the high rate of students taking part-time jobs is poised to persist and possibly intensify in the foreseeable future.

2016年英语一

小作文

Information

October 28th

Welcome to our university! This is an information about the library which is offered to you for your convenience.

  • The library ==opens== at 8 am and ==closes== at 10 pm on working days.
  • The library ==opens== at 9 am and ==closes== at 9 pm on weekends.
  • Please use your students ID card to borrow books or you can complete this ==process== via our website.
  • There is no fees if you return books ==on== time ==otherwise== there will be a 0.3 dollar penalty per day per book.
  • Please keep silence.

Thank your for your attention to this notice. If you have any question about the regular, feel free to ==contact== us at 9999-9999. Your inquiries will be highly appreciated!

Library Office

==Revise==:

Dear International Students,

Welcome to our university! As a librarian, I’m delighted to provide essential information about our library:

  • Operating hours: 8 am to 10 pm on weekdays, 9 am to 9 pm on weekends.
  • Borrowing: Use your student ID or complete transactions on our website.
  • Return Policy: No fees for timely returns; $0.3 per day per book if overdue.
  • Please maintain silence in the library.

For queries, contact us at 9999-9999. Your understanding is appreciated. Enjoy your academic journey!

Li Ming

大作文